🪄Cut the Fluff: Start with the end


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Hey Reader,

"What do I want my readers to walk away with?"

I ask myself this before I write anything.

Because if I don't know where to end, I can't begin.

This is one of the biggest mistakes I see people make.

They've got an idea they want to explore. A story they want to tell. An anecdote in mind to keep it interesting.

But they have no idea what the takeaway is.

What's the point of exploring this idea in the first place?

Why will readers care?

What problems will it help them solve?

Ummm...

If this is you, two things usually happen from here:

  1. You write nothing, because you literally can't start
  2. You write something, but it's totally disconnected from your audience and makes them feel...nothing

Stop the madness. Do this instead.

In Long to Short, my AI-powered course collab with Rob Lennon (where we help people get 50+ social ideas from long-form writing) we encourage you to analyze your content from various angles. This way, you can mine for golden idea nuggets worth exploring deeper.

In step 2, we mine content from "the whole."

Here's an exerpt:

Why​
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Looking at the whole of the content, pull back to see it as something that exists amongst all the other content out there.
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Consider WHY this content exists:
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What is the purpose of what I created? Why must it exist in the world? What goal am I trying to achieve with it?
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You and I
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Now, shift your focus to the YOU (your audience) AND the I (yourself, AKA the creator). Consider the style, vibe, and emotions behind the content.
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What is the reader supposed to feel while going through this content? What makes my content non-generic or unique? What spin did I add that can only come from ME? My opinions, experiences, research, conversations, and stories.

In the course, we're looking at content we already created so we can find juicy angles to dig deeper into.

But this is also a valuable exercise to do before you write.

This way, you know why the hell you're creating the thing in the first place (and can start to form a narrative structure).

Step 1. Answer big WHY + YOU and I questions

By answering these questions, you can start to form a takeaway.

Step 2. Create an outline

I love an outline. It's a mini map that helps me stay on course.

It's also extremely useful when editing, because it reminds you where you wanted to end up, so you can check you're at the right destination.

Get as high level or detailed as you want.

Let's get meta. Here's my outline for this newsletter:

Intro: Open by talking about how I can't write anything without a takeaway
Poke the pain: State how tons of people write without one
Agitate the pain: Share two bad outcomes people endure because of no takeaway
Transition: Transition into solution
Provide a solution: Share a better way. Get specific with steps. Drop examples from Long to Short natively into the content.
Conclusion: End with a takeaway and get meta again "I started with the end, and now we've reached it" or something to that effect

Oops, I just gave away bits we haven't gotten to yet!

Shall we continue?

Step 3. Write

Do your thang.

Step 4. Edit

When you're done, read your content with those big questions you answered at the start in mind.

Sense check:

  • Did I hit my purpose?
  • Have I conveyed my premise accurately?
  • Will the reader feel the way I wanted them to?
  • Did I add enough unique points or anecdotes?
  • Have I communicated my POV enough, or does it sound like anyone could have written it?

Don't skip the edit! Give yourself the courtesy to make sure you're at the right destination. It doesn't have to take very long.

And so, we've reached the end.

My takeaway I had when I started this newsletter was:

Help people understand the importance of a takeaway and empower them to create one before they write.

How'd I do?

Cheers,

Erica

Check out my 3 courses that 1500+ people have taken, loved, and gotten "holy shit" results from:

1. Long to Short: Turn one long-form piece into a month's worth of posts. A step-by-step system to repurpose, remix, and remaster your best ideas.

​Morgan recently said it was the best course she's ever taken.​

2. Hooked on Writing Hooks: Turn your ideas into content that actually gets consumed. Learn to write scroll-stopping hooks on social without resorting to clickbait nonsense that feels inauthentic.

​ConvertKit's social media manager said he absolutely loves it.​

3. Content Editing 101. Kill decision fatigue and build confidence as a writer and editor. A look inside a professional editor's workflow & best practices. Packed with lessons, examples, and a roadmap so you can stop second-guessing your writing & editing decisions.

​Kate says this course has saved her hours in her workflow.​

Each course is AI-powered 🪄

You can go through them manually or use AI to play, get it done faster, and test your new skills in real-time. My friend & prompt genius Rob Lennon wrote all the prompts and bots for the courses.


What'd you find most interesting about today's email? Reply and lemme know.

Erica Schneider

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